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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #105 on: September 05, 2007, 02:00:33 am »
Chapter 3 of my GG story "A Mother's Hope" is now up on fanfiction.net. Here's the link. www.fanfiction.net/s/3764695/3/A_Mothers_hope Please check it out and review either there (if you have an account) or here so I know how you like it. I'm going to start chapter 4 soon, just not right now cause it's 3am!

Have a  great day! ;D Lori

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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #106 on: September 26, 2007, 05:41:08 pm »
Hey, I just updated my season 8 fanfic on Fanfiction.Net and Fanlib. I have two chapters. One is a shorter episode with the rivival of the dance marathon and the next one is the episode where Luke proposes to Lorelai. Here is the summery for episode 5: “Dance, Dance Resolution”- When Taylor’s latest festive move puts the gazebo in really bad shape; the town is in desperate need to raise funds to rebuild it. So the Dance Marathon is revived but with more improvements and more rewards for the winners. Which of course has Lorelai eager and waiting… that is for a very unfortunate Luke. It’s Lorelai/Luke, Rory/Oliver, Kirk/Lulu, Sookie/Jackson, Lane/Zach, Babbette/Mori, and a few other pairings. In the end; someone will win and someone will get an even better surprise… a proposal. Who will it be? Read the next episode to find out. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3557098/5/Season_8_is_Great

Here's the summery for episode 6: “What I’m TRYING to Say is…”- After several failed attempts to pop the question to Lorelai, Luke is about to sell the ring to a pawn shop with Jackson when Sookie goes into labor. Lorelai and Rory take Sookie to the hospital where they all meet up. Luke learns of a secret there both Lorelai and Rory have kept from him and it causes a huge fight with Lorelai. However, when Sookie has her baby the tides change and so does Luke’s attitude on everything. Thank goodness for him Rory is there to lend support.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3557098/6/Season_8_is_Great  Here's a snippet from episode 6...

At this Luke nervously tried to pull something out of his jacket pocket but it fell out and bounced on the floor. It landed right in front of Lorelai’s feet. Lorelai bent down, picked it up and stared at it in disbelief.
   Luke: “I bought that for you because I wanted to say something important to you,”
   Lorelai: “I don’t get it…. are you a jewelry thief now or suddenly turned into Prince?”
   Luke sighed.
   Luke: “Of course not! What I’m TRYING to say is….”
   Luke gulped and shifted nervously. Finally he took a deep breath and barely able to look her in the face, he asked…
   Luke: “Will you marry me?”
   Lorelai exploded with: “That was NOT funny the first time and it’s definitely NOT funny now!”
   Luke: “I wasn’t joking! Believe me even Ed McMahon wouldn’t of laughed at that one!”
   Lorelai: “You’re serious?”
   Lorelai tried to look through Luke with her eyes to detect any hint of teasing.
   Luke confirmed: “Al Gore serious,”
   He stood firm and looked her straight in the eyes.
   Lorelai quickly ducked her head to glance at the ring in her hand. She started muttering to herself over and over again “he’s serious”.
   Rory: “Uh, Mom?”
   Lorelai continued to mutter. Luke walked over to where Rory was standing and waved at Lorelai.
   Luke: “Lorelai…?”
   Lorelai yet again continued to mutter to herself.
   Rory to Luke: “Uh Houston, we have a problem,”
   Luke: “Now this is an unexpected development,”
   Rory: “I think she broke,”
   Luke: “Did I say something wrong?”
   Rory: “Not really. Maybe it wasn’t so much what you SAID, maybe it was what you DID,”
   Luke: “Did? I thought I did it good?”
   Rory: “Well, I think it was the execution,”
   Luke: “Execution? I did it fine. I held on until the right moment and then gave it to her,”
   Rory: “Technically you DROPPED it to her,”
   Luke: “It was really hard to bring it up but…”
   Lorelai suddenly interrupted them by snickering in a trans: “Dirty, dirty… dirty,”
   Luke and Rory eyed each other.
   Rory: “I guess it never fails,”
   Luke sighed: “No matter how out of it she is; that part still works,”
   Rory: “Okay that’s it!”
   Rory marched in between them.
   Rory: “You two are the most pathetic couple I have ever seen! You would give Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy a run for their money! You can’t even get a proposal scene right! I have to step in as a director if there’s any hope for you guys!”
   Rory stormed over to Lorelai.
   Rory: “Mom, let me take your hand,”
   Lorelai: “Okay, where do you want to put it?”
   Rory: “Well Groucho Marx, I’m going to hand it over to Luke,”
   Lorelai: “But he has a hand of his own,”
   Rory: “Mom! Just go along with me here!”
   Lorelai nodded still in a trans-like state. Rory grabbed her hand and pulled her within inches away from Luke. Then she gave her hand to Luke. Rory then went to her other hand.
   Rory: “Now give me the ring,”
   Lorelai: “Nooo, it’s MY ring… Luke gave it to me,”
   Rory: “Yes Mom, it IS your ring but I need it for a minute so Luke can give it back to you… okay?”
   Lorelai: “I guess if I get it back…”
   However, Lorelai was reluctant to let it got and Rory nearly had go into a tug-of-war to release it from Lorelai’s grip.
   Rory gave the ring back to Luke who held it in one hand.
   Luke: “Uh all right… now what?”
   Rory: “Get down on your knees soldier,”
   Luke shook his head firmly.
   Luke: “Nooo way! Asking her to marry me then getting that kind of reaction was embarrassing enough but there is NO WAY, I am going to sink down to that level of…”
   Rory furious shouted: “LUKE!”
   Luke nearly yelped: “What?”
   Rory: “Do you love my Mom?”
   Luke: “Yes…”
   Rory: “Do you want to marry her?”
« Last Edit: September 27, 2007, 04:03:45 pm by JillianLovesFood »

7.1-Luke to Lorelai- "It's like my life isn't even real to me unless you're there, and you're in it, and I'm sharing it with you..."

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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #107 on: September 26, 2007, 11:32:02 pm »
^ good read. *PS* for ya. kudos!

correct me.. is it RORY or is it LUKE whos suppose to say.. "Do you want to marry her?"... last line.. sorry and I love your stories!

GG S8x3 none yet???
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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #108 on: September 27, 2007, 04:03:18 pm »
Thank-you so much....
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correct me.. is it RORY or is it LUKE whos suppose to say.. "Do you want to marry her?"... last line.. sorry
*slaps forehead and sighs* Yeah, add #6 glitch I missed after downloading the story. Thanks for pointing it out. I was in a sort of rush to get the episode out since several people kept on emailing asking me when I would be adding it. I missed a lot of things here and there.

I fixed it. Thanks again. That was only a sample of the entire episode too so to me it's hard to pinpoint mistakes other than grammer. PS back to you! ;D

7.1-Luke to Lorelai- "It's like my life isn't even real to me unless you're there, and you're in it, and I'm sharing it with you..."

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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #109 on: September 27, 2007, 05:59:02 pm »
thank you for the PS. your stories are good read! and thats a lil minor glitch. its hard to write these things. you have good creative juices flowing!

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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #110 on: March 25, 2008, 06:33:21 pm »
OK I finally finished and uploaded episode 7 in my Season 8 fanfiction which happens to be the Lorelai/Luke wedding. So here's a little taste.. Lorelai and Luke are discussing some of the problems in their plans..

Luke sat down at the table while Lorelai poured liquids into cup, brought them over to the table and sat down.
   Lorelai: “There are so many final details that need to be done, my head is spinning like Beatlejuice’s. First I have to get the Dragonfly Inn wedding-ready… complete with the Chouppa as an alter and canopy-like tarps over the seating just in case it rains or something. Not to mention get Jackson’s heaters situated not too close to the tarps so they don’t catch on fire. We don’t need a Backdraft wedding. I have to get the vow written and I am NOT a good writer… Jane Austin would turn over in her grave,”
   Luke: “Not true. What about the testimony letter you wrote on my behalf last year?”
   Lorelai: “Oh you weren’t here for the process of craziness that leaked out of me in trying to come up with something substantial. I only got what I did because I happened to run into you and April at the mall with Rory next to me. If I didn’t have that mental connection you would’ve had a WHOLE different letter. One that even Carl Jung wouldn’t of been able to interrupt,”
   Luke: “Yeah but I’m not exactly a writer myself. I don’t even know any writers to reference other than George Lucas. So I’m in the same boat as you,”
   Lorelai: “And it’s leaking. Great. Should we just nix the whole writing our own vows thing?”
   Luke: “And stick with the old; “Till death do us part”? Tell me that isn’t creepy,”
   Lorelai: “Tim Burton wouldn’t think so. Yeah I do hate thinking of something morbid like death at a wedding and with the rate of divorce I wouldn’t want that to become literal,”
   Luke: “What other things should I do.,. I know I have a lot of work to take care of with the Diner and all but I want to do something to help lift the load off your shoulders,”
   Lorelai: “Get your Best Man and Ushers ready,”
   Luke: “Best Man?”
   Lorelai caught the slight hesitation in Luke’s voice.
   Lorelai: “Yes Best Man… why is that a problem?”
   Luke: “Yeah, it might be… I had someone in mind but he probably won’t come so I need to find a replacement,”
   Lorelai: “Sounds like me with the Ring Bearer problem,”
   Luke: “Isn’t Davy doing it?”
   Lorelai: “He has strepp throat and has been coughing all over the place. Germ smorgishboard anyone?”
   Luke: “No thank-you,”
   Lorelai: ‘I think I came up with the perfect alternative to take his place, though”
   Luke: “Who?”
   That’s when Paul Anka ran into the kitchen and sat down in the chair next to Lorelai. Lorelai pointed at him and said:
   Lorelai: “Paul Anka,”
   Luke with widened eyes: “You’re going to have a DOG be the Ring Bearer? You’re kidding right… God, I hope you’re kidding,”
   Lorelai: “Why not? Paul Anka can take direction like a GPA and he doesn’t tear up any pillows,”
   Luke: “But he’s a DOG!”
   Lorelai: “Really? This whole time I thought he was an Ewok,”
   Luke getting fed up: “Lorelai!”
   Lorelai: “Calm down Luke, everything is going to be fine. Paul Anka wants to do it… right Paul Anka?”
   Paul Anka ran off the chair and zoomed out of the kitchen.
   Lorelai turned to Luke a little sheepishly: “He’s just acting like Lindsey Lohan right now, he’ll be all set by the time the wedding comes,”
   Luke sarcastically: “Sure, I’ll just keep an eye out for flying pigs, too,”
   Lorelai: “I’ll take him with me to the Dragonfly maybe if he sees the place being set up then he’ll be eager enough for me to practice it with him,”
   Luke: “I think you should consider an alternative to your alternative,”


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3557098/7/Season_8_is_Great

7.1-Luke to Lorelai- "It's like my life isn't even real to me unless you're there, and you're in it, and I'm sharing it with you..."

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Stories go where?
« Reply #111 on: November 10, 2008, 12:06:33 am »
Hey all,

I am just curious.  I have a fanfic one shot on GG and I have a feeling I will be writing more.  I am happy to make a writing topic, but where should I put it?

Thanks,
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Re: Stories go where?
« Reply #112 on: November 10, 2008, 12:12:43 am »
Hey there AzurePlatina.  The thread you are looking for is here http://www.gilmoregirls.org/forum/index.php?topic=7715.0.

Look forward to reading your stuff!


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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #113 on: November 10, 2008, 02:21:19 am »
So sorry, won't do that again.  Since it's a bit long, I'll give a link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4643340/1/When_Was_The_Last_Time_You_Saw_Me_Baker - When was the last time you saw me bake?

Rory decides to surprise Dean with something she has never done before ... ever.  Dean finds out and helps.  AKA WWTLTYSMB ... try saying that five times.

While Dean and Rory aren't my favorite couple, this idea doesn't suit Logan and it doesn't suit Jess well. 


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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #114 on: November 10, 2008, 03:31:51 pm »
No need to apologise - just helping you find your way around the ORG.

Will definately check it out later when I have a bit more time.

Cheers


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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #115 on: November 12, 2008, 12:00:47 pm »
Virtual Gilmore Girls Season 9-9.05-Ziggy, Sawdust, & Hypothetical Raccoons

Honestly, this is one of the best episodes I've read featuring a very cute moment involving Doula with Liz, Luke, and Lorelai looking on.  And she's obviously gained both her brother and cousin's intellectual gene. 

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Re: GG Fanfiction - Where dreams come true!
« Reply #116 on: March 07, 2010, 03:43:24 pm »
I know this thread hasn't been active in a while, but it's the only thread for fanfiction I could find.

I'm in the process of writing a Rory/Marty fic. I know most GG fans go for Lorelai fics over Rory, and I know that Marty is not a popular guy for Rory. However, I've been very conscious of not letting Rory be annoying like she was on the show, and I've always seen Rory and Marty having a bit of the Lorelai/Luke dynamic. Not their personalities (Rory is not as manic as Lorelai, and Marty is not as grumpy as Luke) but just the supportive friendship dynamic to their relationship.

Anyways, here are the links (same story, but in case you prefer one of the websites to the other):
Same But Different on BWR
Same But Different on Fanfiction.net

I hope you check it out and enjoy it! I also wrote a L/L one shot on those sites.
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